At the beginning of the 2014-15 school year, I believed I was an excellent writer because of the accolades I earned from scholastic journalism and my position as news editor of the Southwest Shadow, a student-run publication that has been recognized by the Journalism Education Association (JEA) and National Scholastic Press Association (NSPA) as a 2014 online pacemaker recipient. Reflecting upon the past nine months, I have matured as a critical reader and writer, which is evident in the work that I produced for the time being.
When I walked into the English 11 honors classroom on that crisp August day, I had expectations of the course that would soon be surpassed as we progressed into the school year. Initially, I knew there was so much more to learn about the English language. I knew I could improve, but I had thought I was such an excellent writer that I wouldn’t need much improving. However, when my first essay was returned, I was disappointed by the grade I received. I couldn’t believe I had earned the grade that I got.
In response, I took the time to trace the steps I took to produce my writing material and thoroughly reviewed my in-class reflections to see where I had gone wrong. I realized that I did not follow the outline that Mr. Robert Davis, my English instructor, had provided the class with. I didn’t understand the effectiveness of organizing my ideas into a graphic organizer until after this assignment, and slowly began to etch it into my mannerisms to improve my writing skills. Reflecting upon this idea, it is evident that following an outline honed my skills as a writer. It made my ideas sharper and clearer to the audience.
For instance, my summer essay from quarter one is not as concise with its ideas as the essay I submitted in quarter three, another character analysis for an outside reading novel. For one, the grade I received for the essays show that, over time, I began earning better grades. The essay I wrote in quarter one received a 78% while the essay I wrote in quarter three earned an 84%, a 6% difference in less than a few months.
Reflecting on the passages itself, the thesis statements show the most improvement. Below are the thesis statements for both essays:
Quarter one: Using the prominent theme of accomplishment, his story illustrates the notion that the potential for success can be easily accessed to any and all individuals who go looking for it.
Quarter three: The theme in E. Lockhart’s “We Were Liars” displays the deception behind a seemingly perfect and distinguished family.
Although the thesis statement I wrote for quarter one appears longer, the quarter three thesis statement is shorter and more effective. It is more concise and reaches the point quicker than the first quarter thesis statement, and sets the tone for the rest of the essay. It allows the reader to understand what the rest of the material may be about in a shorter sentence, making it more effective overall.
As stubborn as I was when I began the course, Mr. Davis opened my eyes to new concepts that could hone my skills as a writer. In the past year, he has guided me to earning a 2015 Gold Key Scholastic Writing award for a personal essay I wrote earlier this year in November, giving me the opportunity to be featured in a gallery at Springs Preserve. He has guided me with his ideas, using anecdotes, personal memories, stories of experience, etc., to relate them to English lessons and help me grasp the content better.
Additionally, another instance in which my writing has improved is my participation in the blog experiment. Mr. Davis was fully aware that I run my own, personal blog on the side to deposit my thoughts, feelings, words, etc. I believe this assignment was a project that helped myself and other individuals learn the purpose of their writing and how to write for an audience. The experiment allowed me to mature as a blogger, and he supplied me with advice on how to capture an idea and interpret it for an audience.
Overall, learning to write realistically, poetically, persuasively, etc., has allowed me to incorporate these different writing styles into essays that fit the format most appropriately. I am able to identify these styles of writing in the passages I read outside of school and can use the ideas learned in the classroom to apply in my everyday life. Most specifically, I enjoyed producing my realistic narrative in quarter four. It was the first time I tried to mimic the characteristics of a realistic narrative, composing a solid plot, and creating characters that would engage the reader.
In order to to further my progression as a writer in the upcoming school year, I must take into consideration the suggestions my next English instructor will give me. With high regard, I will follow the steps provided, regardless of the style I am used to. I will ensure productivity by writing reflections or documenting the lessons learned in class into a notebook that I will regularly look back to, a mistake I made this year for not regularly reviewing my notes. I am thrilled to continue my journey as a young writer entering my last year of high school. I anticipate the time I will be able to work with my next instructor to hone my skills sharper.